Comments on Academic Article Paper

For the 1st draft, I only used two articles and I really focused on each author's theory. And I explained their theories in depth; my 1st draft was very long and I had a lot of run on sentences. What i did differently was I found another article and I explained the authors theories, but it a more condensed way. I tried to break up my run on sentences, and although I went over 750 words in my final draft, I think it was more concise and organized than my first draft. My final draft also correlated each article in a logical order and the paper as a whole flowed together better than the first draft.